Formative Assessment Possible Answers/Scoring Guide
“Neither Snow” by Billy Collins
Overall effect: Calm amidst the storm.
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Examples of Figurative Language |
Contribution to Overall Effect of the Poem |
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Simile – like krill fleeing the maw of an advancing whale |
The intensity of the image adds to the effect of the snowstorm |
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Metaphor – run of white plankton |
Builds on the image of the sea; snow is white |
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Metaphor – undersea creature |
Enhances the sea feeling – protected, enveloped in the taxi (almost Jonah-like) |
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Hyperbole – tons of water, tons of people |
Adds to the heavy feeling of the storm |
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Personification – race of snow |
Adds more force to the situation of the storm |
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Irony – he just happened to be in the taxi when the snow storm hit |
His safe place is in the undersea creature, the taxi, while the snow rages outside |
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Symbolism – taxi represents the poet’s view of life as an observer |
There is calm inside despite the raging snow storm outside – just like life |
Formative Assessment Scoring Guide:
2 points – Overall effect conveyed by the author is appropriate. An example of a figurative language is cited and explained thoroughly.
1 point – Overall effect conveyed by the author is appropriate. An example of a figurative language is cited. The explanation is not thorough and/or relevant to the text.
0 points - Other